FLORIDA INTERNATIONAL UNIVERSITY

                                           College of Education

                                            University Park Campus

                                                                             

                                                                             

Department:            Curriculum and Instruction

Course Title:           Instruction in Language Arts (cross-listed with Instruction in Early Childhood Language Arts)

Course Number:     LAE 6319 (cross-listed with LAE 6305)

Credit:                    3 semester hours

  Professor:               Joyce C. Fine, Ed. D.

Location:                EB 147

Day & Time:           Tuesdays, Thursdays 4:30-7:10 p.m.  

Dr. Fine’s Office:    University Park Campus, Room 260 A,

                              Office (305) 348-6152 or (305) 348-2005 (secretary)

                              FAX: (305) 348-2086

E-mail:                    finej@fiu.edu

Office Hours:          Pines Center -Tuesday, 2:30 - 4:30, 7:10 - 7:40; Thursdays, 2:30 – 4:30; 7:10 - 7:40

 

Course Description and Prerequisites                                                                                 

One course (LAE 6319) is required in the Master’s in Reading Education and the other (LAE 6305) is required in the Master’s in Early Childhood Education programs. Students gain knowledge of the nature and roles of the nature of the language arts and how they can be effectively integrated throughout the curriculum. Prerequisites are an undergraduate Language Arts class or equivalent or permission of the instructor (Florida International University Catalog).

I.       Purpose of Course:

The course develops knowledge of the learning environment, which reflects the needs of a diverse population and knowledge of strategies for the instruction of the six language arts. It refines skills related to curriculum development, methods of assessment and instruction, selections of materials, and review of research for preschool and K-12 Language Arts. This course follows guidelines recommended by the International Reading Association (IRA) in A Reference for the Preparation of Educators in the United States: Standards for Reading Professionals(Revised 1998), Standards for Reading Professionals – Revised 2003 and by IRA and the National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE) in their Standards for the English Language Arts (1996) and the Florida Department of Education’s Educator Accomplished Practices at the Accomplished level and the Florida Curriculum Frameworks/ Sunshine State Standards (FCC/SSS).It refines skills related to program development, methods of teaching, selection of materials, and review of research in education. This course is an elective in the Master’s in Reading Education, Master’s in Elementary Education, or the Master’s in Early Childhood Education.

 

 

II.                 Course Objectives Upon completion of the course, students will be able to do the following:

·        Evaluate their literacy environment to be able to make improvements to scaffold student’s growth in literacy

·        Assess students in the Language Arts, including reading, writing, and spelling to be able to effectively  instruct students in literacy

·        Use professional textbooks, journals, and technological resources to gain information in Language Arts

·        Create a cross-curricular unit with many resources to motivate students’ learning

·        Use standards to accomplish the above

Key

Letters = Florida Educator Accomplished Practices (FEAP’s)

(A-   Assessment, C- Communication, CI- Continuous Improvement,

CT- Critical Thinking, D- Diversity, E- Ethics, HD- Human Development,

KSM- Knowledge of Subject Matter, LE- Learning Environment, P- Planning,

RT- Role of the Teacher, T- Technology)

 

Language Arts

 

FEAP’s

 

International Reading Association (IRA) Standards

Assessment Method/ Assignments incorporating multiple standards

1. Assessment

3.1 Support the classroom teacher in the assessment of individual students. They extend the assessment to further determine proficiencies and difficulties for appropriate service.

*IRI Assignment; * Writing Assessment & Process Writing Assignment

 

2. Commun-

ication

3.4 Communicate assessment information to various audiences for both accountability and instructional purposes

* Writing Assessment and Process Writing

3.Continuous Improvement

4.2 Assist the classroom teacher and paraprofessional in selecting materials the reading levels, interest, and cultural and linguistic background of students.

*Unit

*Journal Article summary and implications

6. Ethics

5.1 Articulate the theories related to the connections between teacher dispositions and student achievement.

*Writing Assessment and  Process Writing

7. Human Development and Learning

1.3 Identify, explain, compare, and contrast the theories and research in the areas of language development and learning to read.

 

*Observation and evaluation with TEX-IN 2 the Classroom

8. Knowledge of Subject Matter

4.4 Use methods to effectively revise instructional plans to motivate students

*Writing Assessment and

Process writing assignment

* Unit

9. Learning Environment

4.2 Assist the classroom teacher and paraprofessional in selecting materials the reading levels, interest, and cultural and linguistic background of students.

TEX-IN 2 the Classroom  and * Final showing change

* Unit

10. Planning

2.3 Support classroom teachers and paraprofessionals in the use of a wide range of curriculum materials.  They help teachers select appropriate options and explain the evidence base for selecting practices to best meet the needs of all students. They demonstrate the options in their own teaching and in demonstration teaching.

 

*Theme Cycle unit plan

*Writing Assessment and Process Writing Assignment

 

11. Role of the Teacher

3.4 Communicate assessment information to various audiences for both accountability and instructional purposes

*Parent /Stakeholder conference in Process Writing Assignment

12. Technology

4.2 Assist the classroom teacher and paraprofessional in selecting materials the reading levels, interest, and cultural and linguistic background of students.

*Identify and evaluate non-print materials for Unit Plan

 

III.        KNOWLEDGE BASE

Much of the content of Language Arts is based on the Constructivist learning theories of Jean Piaget (1886-1980) and Social Constructivist Lev Vygotsky (1896-1934).  Piaget shifted the thinking of his time from that of Behaviorism, which had influenced education for decades, in which teachers had been the dispensers of knowledge. Piaget describes learning as the student’s modification of cognitive structures, schema, by interacting with and adapting to their environment. Information-processing theory (Flavell, 1985) also impacts the new view as it emphasizes the learner’s thinking processes. Vygotsky emphasized learning as a reflection of culture and community.  Each person personalizes their thinking based on their own experiences and interests. Learners problem-solve under adult guidance or in collaboration with peers.     

 

Language Arts teachers need to establish nurturing classrooms in which they put theory into practice and adhere to high standards (Presley, Allington, Morrow & Block, 1999). This involves a balance of skill instruction, literary interpretation, higher-level reasoning and responses to communications, independent motivation and discovery in learning. Students should be involved in authentic, meaning-based instruction including collaborations to solve real problems. Ruddell and Ruddell (1995) have summarized the qualities that distinguish the most effective language arts teachers into five categories: 1) personal characteristics, 2) understanding learners’ potential, 3) attitude toward subject, 4) being concerned about student’s life and 5) a quality-based instructional base. Furthermore, it is important to solicit students’ voices and choices, especially when there are so many students from diverse populations.

 

 

 

IV.       RESOURCES

Required Class Materials/Text/ Readings
FIU e-mail account
FIU library
[schedule]

Johns, J. L. (2001). Basic reading inventory: Pre-primer through grade twelve and early literacy assessments (7th ed.) Dubuque, IO: Kendall/ Hunt.

Tompkins, G. E. (2002). Language arts: Content and teaching strategies. Upper Saddle River, NJ: Merrill-Prentice Hall.

Resources:   

Flood, J. Lapp, D., Squire, J. R., & Jensen, J. M., (2003). Handbook of research on teaching the English language arts. Mahwah, NJ: Erlbaum.

Publication manual of the American Psychological Association (5th ed.). (2001). Washington, DC: American Psychological Association.

Tompkins, G. E. & Blanchfield, C. (2004).  Teaching vocabulary: 50 creative strategies, grades k-12.

 

Students will read selected readings of journal articles and those suggested by the professor related to session topics.

On-line sources:

www.reading.org - International Reading Association, has position statements, news in the field of reading

www.ciera.org - Has reports of research that may be used for the article presentations.

www.prenhall.com/tompkins Has chapter summaries, self-assessment quizzes. The quizzes are part of your midterm and final grades.

http://readingonline.org – journal articles

 

Grades

Grades will be assigned as follows:

Rubric Grading Criteria:

[Developing = less than satisfactory] To earn a Developing, some of the requirement must be met but the assignment is not at the satisfactory level.

[Basic = satisfactory] To earn a grade of Basic, all requirements of assignment must be met and be at a satisfactory level.

[Proficient = exceeds satisfactory] To earn a grade of Proficient, all requirements of assignment must be met and must exceed the satisfactory level. This means that assignments are very well done, with evidence of student effort (thought).

[Distinguished = model quality] To earn a grade of Distinguished, all requirements of assignment must be met and the content and presentation of the assignments must reflect model quality. "Model quality" means that in addition to those attributes for an "exceeds satisfactory" assignment, the work reflects exceptional clarity and precision.

The grade of "IN" (incomplete) will be assigned in accordance with FIU policy.

In order to receive a grade of "DR" (Drop), a course must be dropped on or before

June 5, 2004 by 1 p.m.

Rubrics and the conversion to the grading scale:

The grading of individual assignments will be using a rubric with a scale from developing (with a factor value of (1), basic (2), proficient (3) and distinguished (4). The rubric levels do not represent equal intervals of increments. These points along a continuum, from low to high, will be weighted and converted to allow use of the above point scale. Each assignment will be weighted with a factor value such as x 1, x 2, x 3, x 4, etc. 

Example: To determine the points earned, if the assignment is weighted with a factor of 2 and the student earns a distinguished (4), then the total number of points for the assignment is equal to (4 x 2 = 8). The point values from all assignments and class participation are added to determine the number of points earned in the class. The sum of points is related to the scale below for conversion to letter grades. See the schedule of topics, assignments, and weights for more explanation. Rubrics must be attached to assignments when being submitted for grading.

A= 95 - 100%  B+ = 87 - 89%  C+ = 77 - 79%   D+ = 67 - 69%

A- = 90 -94%   B= 83 - 86%     C= 73 - 76%      D= 63 - 66%

                         B- = 80 - 82%   C- = 70 - 72%   D- = 60 - 62%

F = below 60%

Student Responsibilities

Materials / Equipment

 

1.    Students must secure Florida International University e-mail addresses, which will be used for course communication. This will be given to the professor by the second class meeting.

2.    Students will complete assigned readings and participate in whole-class discussions, small-group discussions, and interactive lectures on the topics listed on the schedule of topics. Students will bring all texts to each class. 

3.    Students will keep a separate journal for class writing activities. This will be brought to each class session. They will begin keeping the various types of journals in class at a consistently scheduled time, the first ten minutes of class, and will write a 1 ½ to 2-page critical reflection after using all the different types of journals.

4.    Students will have access to a computer with connections to the Internet. They will type work using a word processor and save work so as not to have to re-type or re-write assignments.

5.    Students will download the Florida Curriculum Frameworks/ Sunshine State Standards, Grade Level Equivalents for all levels of Language Arts (prek-2, 3-5, 6-8, 9-12) from the Florida Department of Education web-page at http://www.firn.edu/doe. These will be used as the standards in planning lessons.

Quality of Work

  1. Assignments will reflect student=s own thought and effort. Plagiarism will result in an F grade for the assignment (this includes exams or major projects). The professor may take further action as described in the Academic Misconduct section of the current FIU Student Handbook.
  2. Each assignment will be ready to be turned in no later than the beginning of the class meeting at which it is due. In the event of an absence, the student must make arrangements to have the assignment delivered to class on time. No assignments will be accepted after the date it is due.
  3. Assignments which have been turned in on time and which have earned an Unacceptable or DEVELOPING may be re-worked and resubmitted once for re-evaluation no later than one class after it is returned. Assignments due after March 1 are excluded from this option. The maximum grade possible for a resubmitted assignment is a BASIC.
  4. All assignments should reflect professional quality -- ideas expressed clearly, correct grammar and spelling used, and neat in appearance.

Attendance/ Attitude

  1. Students will arrive on time and stay the entire class session unless prior arrangements have been made. A pattern of lateness (2 classes) may result in a deduction of 10 points from the course total points for each instance thereafter. Students are expected to abide by the student code of conduct and policies as published in the FIU 2003--2004 Student Handbook. Beepers or cellular phones must be turned off prior to class. There will be a deduction of 2 points from the final grade for any interruption that disrupts the flow of the class. If there are extenuating circumstances for which the communication device must be left on, the candidate must tell the professor prior to class. The student must take the call out of the classroom. 

2.    Students will attend ALL class meetings and be ON TIME. For each absence from class missed after the first one, there will be a 1 point deduction from the total grade. Any absences must be cleared with the instructor prior to the class meeting missed.  After an absence, students are responsible for obtaining class notes, information, and/or instruction from classmates. Students may then request clarifications from the instructor.

3.    Because much of the learning in this course is built around interactive sessions with classmates, if a pattern of absences and/or lateness and/or leaving before class concludes is established, a student will be have 10 points deducted from the course total for each instance.          

4.    Because professional behavior is expected, for each incident of unprofessional behavior on the part of the candidate when interacting with peers, with the professor, or with any FIU personnel, there will be a deduction of 10 (ten) points. Such behavior COULD result in the student not being allowed to continue in the class. A meeting with individuals involved must take place in the professor’s office prior to the next class session.

COURSE ACTIVITIES/ ASSIGNMENTS/ REQUIREMENTS

1.                Candidates will complete assigned readings and participate in whole-class discussion, small-group discussion, and interactive lectures on the topics listed on the schedule of topics. 

2.                Students will participate in journal writing in class and as directed.

3.                Reading Assessment – Candidates in the Language Arts class will assess a student’s reading using an IRI.

4.                Writing Assessment and Process Writing Assignment — Candidate will assess the same (if possible) student’s writing using a writing assessment tool, and spelling using a spelling assessment tool and relate it to the student’s developmental stages as discussed in class. This information will be used to plan a guided reading lesson and writing process instruction with reciprocal mapping for either a whole class or a small group of children needing similar instruction. Candidates will conference with students in groups so that the students will support each other’s development. The candidate will also invite the parents (or stakeholders) of the children to respond to their child’s writingScribliolink- and will share the developmental writing process with the parents (stakeholders). Students will write a reflection on the process of linking instruction to assessment and including the parent in the instructional process as a partner.

5.                Theme Cycle unit plan--Candidates will create an interdisciplinary, standards-based literature unit for students. This will include ideas for creating an environment that is conducive to language arts learning for diverse students. Students will be encouraged to incorporate technology and community resources in the unit. Instruction will include lessons to increase vocabulary and integrated language arts. Each candidate will write a reflection on the process of creating the integrated unit. 

6.                Candidates will complete a final. The final will include a reflection on the changes you made or plan to make to your literacy environment based on the TEXT-IN2 self-evaluation. This may be done from the perspective of a Reading Specialist/ Literacy Coach in the classroom of classroom teacher. How would you assist that teacher in creating a literate environment that fosters reading and writing. 

 

 

Language Arts Assignment: TEX-IN2 the Classroom Evaluation of Literacy Curriculum

 

The  TEX-IN3 involves a “counting” and “characterizing” of the texts that are part of the literacy environment.  Recent research suggests that the relationship between the environment and literacy development, particularly when supported through active instruction (Allington, 2000; Duke, 2000) is important. 

 

Purpose:           To aid teachers in self-evaluating and improving the literacy environment in their classrooms with the intention of scaffolding students’ growth in literacy

                        To make inferences concerning the effectiveness of the curriculum

                        To understand the theories of language development, cognition, and learning and the environment and experiences that support growth in literacy

Note:                Your grade is not based on the value that you self-assign, but the inferences drawn from your self-evaluation, your goals for professional development, what you hope to gain from this class, and what you plan to do to improve your literacy instruction. (Protocol may be legibly handwritten. Protocol report must be typed, professional quality.)

Procedures:      1.     Using the TEX-IN2 the Classroom instrument, evaluate your classroom literacy environment. The TEX-IN2 is adapted from the TEXT-IN3 (Hoffman, 2001) and the training module (Sailors, 2001) which include a text inventory, interviews, and text-in-use observations.  You will do only the inventory and interviews, two out of three of the original parts.

a.       Text-inventory—

1.      Evaluate the number and character [quantity/variety/ format; engaging qualities: accessibility; challenge level; cultural and linguistic representation; authorship (local/commercial); public/personal; extended/limited; process/product]. Include description of what is present and comments for all 17 types. Put the name of the category on top and fill in the chart for the category, definition, description and comments for each. See booklet for example.

2.      Give a holistic rating for the physical text environment 1-5

3.      Photograph and caption an example of each type of text from your room, if possible. If the category is not in the classroom you are using for the inventory, find an example of each category and identify the source. (This may involve going to other classrooms or schools.)

b.      Text-interviews—Teacher (yourself) demographic

1.      Demographics- Give the information on the first page of the booklet.

2.      Rate [from 1 (least) to 5 (most)] the importance of the seventeen types of text

3.      Rank the text from most to least important (from1 most-17 least) (careful of reversal from rating scale).

4.      Answer the questions about other texts you would like to have. Why? Which would you get rid of if you could? Why?

c.       Text-interviews- Students—

5.      Demographic information:  Give the information on the first page of the booklet.  

6.      Select up to 3 students based on their reading instructional placement: reading instructionally in above-grade level materials, reading instructionally in grade level materials, reading instructionally below grade level.  Identify which level each one is and then ask each individually, to tell you the form, function, use, value, and critical stance of the same three types of text.  Rate their understanding of the text, text’s purpose, and value and any other comments made. 

7.      Give a holistic rating for each student’s understanding of the text in your room. 

2.      Write a protocol based on the self-report of the state of the literacy environment in your classroom.   Include the parts listed on the protocol in the booklet including the following information:

a.                   name of the instrument—capitalized, centered, and underlined (Always underline the name of an instrument.)

b.                  purpose of the instrument – use verbs in the present tense (The purpose of the TEX-IN3 is …)

c.                   description of the setting— use verbs in the past tense (The inventory and interview parts of the TEX-IN2 in the Classroom were conducted as a self-report by…  on… in…  Include any pertinent facts that would help the reader understand the setting or the circumstances of the setting, i.e. first year teacher’s room, newly formed class, portables, open pod classroom, recently suffered the effects of _______ natural disasters, etc.

d.                  findings—Report the holistic ratings for each section.

           

Source of Score

Holistic score

1. Holistic Rating for Physical Text Environment

 

2. Holistic Rating for Local Texts in Classroom

 

3. Student Reading in Below-Grade Level Materials

 

4. Student Reading in Grade-Level Materials

 

5. Student Reading in Above-Grade Level Materials

 

6. Teacher’s Holistic Self- Rating 

 

 

e.                   Interpretations—On a separate sheet of paper, write the inferences you can draw from your self-assessment. Set your goals for professional development during this term. Set your goal by selecting three categories for improving your classroom literacy environment. Decide the steps you will take to improve them.  You will explain what steps you have taken to improve these as part of your final exam for the class.     

 Turn in: a notebook or duotang with your name and SSN on the outside cover, the protocol report, the protocol booklet with marked rubrics, your charts for the categories and interviews, the captioned pictures and your interpretations.  You must include an extra copy of the page, Interpretation and Action Goal Setting to be used for your final exam along with the Rubric for TEX-IN2 the Classroom Evaluation.  

Rubric for TEX-IN2 the Classroom

 

Developing

Basic

Proficient

Distinguished

Text-inventory evaluation of classroom is incomplete for some types of text, with minimum detail, includes a holistic rating that inaccurately assigns a value to the environment

 

Text-inventory evaluation of classroom includes the rubric and chart for each category, has some comments with little detail, includes a holistic rating that accurately assigns a value to some of the environment

Text-inventory evaluation of classroom includes the rubric and chart for each category, has mostly detailed comments, includes a holistic rating that accurately assigns a value to most of the environment

Text-inventory evaluation of classroom includes the rubric and chart for each category, is rich with detailed comments, includes a holistic rating that accurately assigns a value to the environment

Has no photos or has pictures correctly identifying a few categories

Has photos correctly identifying 13 of the categories

Has most photos correctly identifying 15 of the categories

Has photos correctly identifying each of the 17 categories

Text-Interviews--Has many errors in descriptions of categories of students or info for parts of protocols, has not interviewed any students. 

Text-Interviews—Has some errors in categories of students, or info for parts of protocols, has interviewed less than three students about three or less types of text.  

Text-interviews--Has most categories of students, and all info for parts of protocols, has interviewed three students on three types of text and captured some of their comments. 

Text-interviews-- Has all categories correctly marked for categories of students and all info for parts of protocols, has interviewed three students on at least three types of text and fully and accurately captured their comments. 

Has written a protocol report that is not accurate, or appropriate, or is not sensitive to student’s needs, or follows                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  the protocol sheets.

Has written a protocol report that is partially accurate, or appropriate, or is sensitive to student’s needs, or follows                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  the protocol sheets.

Has written a protocol report that is mostly  accurate, appropriate, and sensitive to student’s needs, and which mostly follows                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  the protocol sheets.

Has written a protocol report that is accurate, appropriate, and is sensitive to student’s needs, follows                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  the protocol sheets.

Has protocol with little info and/or  interpretation or has not identified three areas for improvement with adequate steps for improvement of each

Has protocol with some info and interpretation with three areas clearly identified with inadequate steps for matching reading levels, interests, and cultural and linguistic backgrounds of students. Lacks clear links to foundational knowledge

Has protocol with much info and rich, interpretation with three areas clearly identified with some steps matching reading levels, interests, and cultural and linguistic backgrounds clearly linked to foundational knowledge

Has protocol with much info and rich, fully developed  interpretation with three areas clearly identified and explicit plans for matching reading levels, interests, and cultural and linguistic backgrounds clearly linked to foundational knowledge

Notebook lacks  professional organization and appearance and / or lacks evaluation.

Has information in a professional presentation (pictures labeled and secured)

Has a short self-evaluation of own literacy environment

Has mostly all information organized with tabs or flags identifying parts in a professional presentation (pictures labeled and either scanned or secured well) Has 1 page self evaluated stating personal insights gained

Has information organized with secured tabs or flags  in a professional presentation (pictures labeled and either scanned or secured well) ** Has  1 page self-evaluation of assignment stating insights gained for assessing literacy environments.

     

                Dr. Fine’s evaluation of assignment __________________________________

 

                                                   Language Arts Assignment:  IRI

                                                                             

Purpose: Understand the nature and causes of reading difficulty

Procedure: 1. Administer the IRI according to directions in the text and those given in class

    1. Write a protocol with the name of the instrument (capitalized, centered on page, and underlined) with the  information listed under the following headings:

a.          Purpose: – from book, use verbs in the present tense

b.          Description of student and testing situation—use passive verbs in the past tense (i.e. Maria J. was tested on February 10, 2003 in the library during school hours when no other students were present)

c.          Findings: Use a chart to tell the independent, instructional, and frustrational level as well as the listening level (Give listenting level only if the student is in the intermediate grades and is not an ESOL student)

Form

Passage Level

Flash Word Recognition Level

Word Recognition

from  Passage

Comprehension Level

Reading Level (considering WR and Comprehension)

A

1

20 - Independent

 

Independent

Independent

A

2

19 - Independent

 

Instructional

Instructional

A

3

13 - Frustrational

 

Frustrational

Frustrational

B

3

XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

< 70%

Listening: Instructional

 

d.          Interpretation: bullet using complete sentences 1) Areas of Strength and 2) Areas for Growth, giving more strengths than the areas for growth

e.          On a separate sheet of paper, write a self-assessment reflection. Self-assess on rubric also.

Turn in: the protocol report with all the protocol sheets and the analysis sheets (Analyze decoding for the independent and instructional levels only. Analyze comprehension from the independent, instructional, and the instructional / frustrational levels.)

   

 

Rubric for Informal Reading Inventory (IRI)

 

Characteristic

 

Developing

 

Basic

 

Proficient

 

Distinguished

 

Has used graded word list for placement to begin the passages.

 

Has incorrectly administered or marked or identified place to begin graded word passages

 

Multiple errors which slightly effect the outcomes of the assessment.

 

Has correctly administered and marked on word list where to begin passages with some errors that do not effect the outcomes of the assessment.

 

Has correctly administered and marked on word list where to begin graded word passages

 

Has used graded passages for determining independent, instructional,

frustrational, and listening level.

 

Has incorrectly identified or did not identify one of the levels of functioning.

 

Multiple errors which slightly effect the outcomes of the assessment.

 

Some errors that do not effect the outcomes of the assessment.

 

 Has correctly identified all the levels, independent,  instructional, frustrational, and listening (if appropriate).

 

Does not apply miscue analysis to identify problem patterns   

 

Incorrectly identifies problems

 

Multiple errors which effects the analysis

 

Some minor errors 

 

Marks and identifies miscues and identifies problem

 

Incorrectly assesses retellings, cued questions for comprehension

 

Incorrectly  assesses retelling or fails to ask for retelling; incorrectly evaluates responses to questions

 

Multiple errors

 

Some errors

 

Correctly captures, assesses retelling and classifies types of errors; correctly evaluates responses to questions

 

Incorrectly writes protocol report

 

Incorrectly links data to write report or does not include all parts

 

Many errors

 

Some errors

 

Correctly links data to write report following direction in class.

 

Has not  included tape of passages, missing some summary pages

 

No tape or does not have protocol pages or summary pages

 

Some parts missing

 

Has all of tape and all protocol pages, most summary sheets filled in

 

High quality tape, all protocol pages and all summary pages included.

 

Lacks professional quality

 

Multiple errors that interfere with report’s communication

 

Several errors that do not interfere with communication

 

A few minor errors that do not interfere with communication and has a self-assessment reflection & on rubric

 

Correct spelling, punctuation, grammar: professional appearance and self-assessment reflection & on rubric

Self-assessment________________________________________

Dr. Fine’s assessment __________________________________

 

 

Six Traits Scoring Guide for Creative Writing

 

Word Choice    1

3

5

The writer struggles with a limited vocabulary, searching for words to convey meaning:

  • Vague
  • Redundancy
  • Jargon or clichés
  • Words are used incorrectly
  • Language leaves reader wondering what writer’s trying to say

Language is functional, even if it lacks punch; it gets the message across:

  • Words correct and adequate; they simply lack flair
  • Familiar words and phrases
  • Attempts colorful language but sometimes seem overdone
  • Energetic verbs, phrases liven things up now and then

Words convey the intended message in a precise, interesting and natural way:

  • Words are specific and accurate
  • Language is natural and never overdone
  • Lively verbs, precise nouns and modifiers
  • Striking words and phrases
  • Clichés, jargon used sparingly

 

 

Sentence Fluency     1

3

5

The reader has to practice quite a bit in order to give this paper a fair interpretive reading:

  • Choppy, incomplete, rambling or awkward
  • Phrasing does not sound natural
  • Sentences begin the same way
  • Endless connectives
  • Does not invite expressive oral reading

The text hums along with a steady beat, more pleasant or businesslike than musical, more mechanical than fluid:

  • Sentences usually grammatical, hang together
  • Some variation in sentence length and structure
  • Reader sometimes has to hunt for clues that show how sentences interrelate

Parts of the text invite expressive oral reading

 

Easy flow and rhythm when read aloud.  Sentences are well built, with strong and varied structure:

  • Sentences make meaning clear
  • Purposeful sentence beginnings
  • The writing has cadence
  • Vary in length as well as structure
  • Fragments, if used, add style

Conventions     1

3

5

Errors in spelling, punctuation, usage and grammar, capitalization, and/or paragraph repeatedly distract the reader and make the text difficult to read:

  • Paragraphing is missing, irregular, or too frequent
  • Errors in grammar/usage are very noticeable
  • Punctuation often missing or incorrect
  • Spelling errors are frequent
  • Must read once to decode; again for meaning
  • Extensive editing required for publication

Reasonable control over a limited range of standard writing conventions.  Conventions are sometimes handled well and enhance readability:

  • Paragraphing is attempted
  • Problems with grammar/usage not serious
  • Terminal (end-of-sentence) punctuation is usually correct
  • Spelling is usually correct or phonetic on common words
  • Moderate editing required for publication

Demonstrates a good grasp of standard writing conventions, uses conventions effectively to enhance readability.  Errors tend to be so few and so minor that the reader can easily overlook them:

  • Paragraphing tends to be sound
  • Grammar and usage are correct
  • Punctuation is accurate
  • Spelling is generally correct
  • May manipulate conventions—especially grammar/spelling for stylistic effect
  • Only light editing for publication
  • Gr. 7+--writing is sufficiently long and complex to allow using a wide range of conventions

Ideas and Content     1

3

5

As yet, the paper has no clear sense of purpose or central theme.  To extract meaning form the text, the reader must make inferences based on sketchy details:

  • Still in search of topic
  • Information is very limited or unclear
  • Text may be repetitious, reads like disconnected thoughts
  • Everything seems as important as everything else

The writer is beginning to define the topic, even though development is still basic or general:

  • Easy to see where the writer is headed
  • Difficulty going from general observations to specifics
  • Ideas are reasonably clear
  • Support is attempted, but falls short of fleshing out the main point

Paper is clear and focused.  Holds the reader’s attention.  Relevant anecdotes and details enrich the central theme or storyline:

  • Ideas are fresh and original
  • Writing from knowledge or experience
  • Relevant, telling, quality go beyond the obvious
  • Topic developed in an enlightening, purposeful way
  • Every piece adds something to the whole

 

Organization     1

3

5

Writing lacks a clear sense of direction.  Ideas, details or events seem loosely strung together; no identifiable internal structure:

  • Sequencing needs work
  • No real lead, no real conclusion
  • Pacing feels awkward
  • Connections between ideas are confusing
  • Hard for the reader to get a grip

Organization is strong enough to move the reader through the text without undue confusion:

  • Recognizable introduction and conclusion
  • Sequencing is logical, but predictable
  • Pacing fairly well controlled
  • Transitions often work well but are sometimes fuzzy
  • Organization sometimes supports the main storyline

Organization enhances and showcases the central idea or storyline.  The order, structure or presentation of information is compelling and moves the reader through the text:

  • Sequencing is logical and effective
  • An inviting introduction; a satisfying conclusion
  • Pacing is well controlled
  • Thoughtful transitions
  • Flows smoothly, the reader hardly thinks about it

Voice     1

3

5

Writer seems indifferent, uninvolved or distanced from the topic and/or the audience.  Writing is lifeless or mechanical; technical or jargonistic:

  • Hard to sense the writer.  Does not seem to reach out to an audience
  • Monotone
  • May communicate on a functional level, but it does not move reader
  • Writer does not seem at home with the topic

Sincere, but not fully engaged or involved.  Pleasant or even personable, but not compelling

  • Communicates in an earnest, pleasing manner
  • General, dispassionate language
  • Writing hides as much of the writer as it reveals
  • Aware of an audience, to weigh words carefully

Writer speaks directly to the reader; writing is individualistic, expressive and engaging.  Writer is involved in the text, writing to be read:

  • Strong interaction with the writer, person behind the words
  • Appropriate for the purpose and audience
  • Narrative is honest, appealing, and written from the heart
  • Expository or persuasive, reflects a strong commitment, anticipates the reader’s questions, and shows why the reader should care

 

 

LAE 6319 Writing Assessment & Process Writing Assignment

Purpose: 

To appreciate the Synchronous Model of reading/ writing/ spelling development

To link assessment and instruction in reading, writing, and spelling to the Florida Sunshine State grade level standards

To provide a link between the writing instruction in school and literacy at home

To develop a lesson to integrate reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing and visually representing with Guided Reading and Reciprocal Mapping

To teach the conventions of standard English, spelling patterns,

To provide opportunities for students to be readers, writers, reactors, and responders

Procedure:

  1. Use the results from the reading assessment to select a book from the student’s instructional level. Plan an appropriate guided reading lesson. As part of the extension from the guided reading lesson using the tradebook, ask student to write a response to the book.  Evaluate the spelling using the Synchronous Model of Integrated Reading, Writing, and Spelling as shown in the Weaving Assessment into Practice format from Tompkins (p.514, 516) and 6 Trait Writing Assessment. Plan minilessons and guide the student through the writing process stages focusing on improving some aspect of writing.
    1. Use the Reciprocal Mapping strategy to map the tradebook used for the guided reading lesson and create a prewriting map for the student’s original composition.
    2. Share the work with a stakeholder.                  

a.             Keep all papers together to be able to share the stages of development with a parent or interested adult. DATE and LABEL the STAGE of writing process each represents (planning, drafting, etc.).

b.                   Invite a parent or stakeholder (interested adult) to read and discuss the student’s work.

c.                    Allow the parent/ stakeholder to read and respond to the writing in the publication stage first.

d.                   Ask the adult if there are any further comments (anything they wish to tell you about, elaborate on) after reading the written work. Ask about the student’s reading or writing at home.

e.                    Give the parent/stakeholder information explaining such aspects of teaching as standards, developmental stages, the importance of reading and writing at home, to help him or her understand and appreciate the goals for building literacy.

f.                     Write a report.

a.        Briefly describe the lesson telling the name and author of the tradebook and what your objectives were. (Discuss the links to the student’s assessment, why you focused on the particular minilesson. Based on the findings of the IRI, the student needed… based on the writing assessment the student needed instruction in the following: which conventions of standard written English, …which content traits to improve…)

b.       Tell who the parent /stakeholder is and the relationship to the student.  Describe the response and any further comments (insights) about the student’s writing. (You may want to tape this to capture the response.)

c.        What does the parent/stakeholder say about the student’s uses of literacy at home? (How, where, and when does the student read and write?)

d.       What did you need to explain to the parent about the way you teach reading and writing? (Tell about quality, integrated assessment and instruction.)

e.        What did you learn from the Scribliolink process (linking home or stakeholders and school through writing process) that will help you support this student and others in general.

Turn in:  The rubric for grading, the guided reading lesson plan using the class format, the report with a-e answered, the student samples from the developmental writing process.

 

eFolio MS in Reading Education Artifacts and Rubrics

 

Course

LAE 6319

Assignment/

Artifact Generic Name

 Writing Assessment & Process Writing Assignment

Description (from syllabus)

Purpose: 

To appreciate the Synchronous Model of reading/ writing/ spelling development

To link assessment and instruction in reading, writing, and spelling to the Florida Sunshine State grade level standards

To provide a link between the writing instruction in school and literacy at home

To develop a lesson to integrate reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing and visually representing with Guided Reading and Reciprocal Mapping

To teach the conventions of standard English, spelling patterns,

To provide opportunities for students to be readers, writers, reactors, and responders

Procedure:

  1. Use the results from the reading assessment to select a book from the student’s instructional level. Plan an appropriate guided reading lesson. As part of the extension from the guided reading lesson using the tradebook, ask student to write a response to the book.  Evaluate the spelling using the Synchronous Model of Integrated Reading, Writing, and Spelling as shown in the Weaving Assessment into Practice format from Tompkins (p.514, 516) and 6 Trait Writing Assessment. Plan minilessons and guide the student through the writing process stages focusing on improving some aspect of writing.
    1. Use the Reciprocal Mapping strategy to map the tradebook used for the guided reading lesson and create a prewriting map for the student’s original composition.
    2. Share the work with a stakeholder.                  

a.             Keep all papers together to be able to share the stages of development with a parent or interested adult. DATE and LABEL the STAGE of writing process each represents (planning, drafting, etc.).

g.                   Invite a parent or stakeholder (interested adult) to read and discuss the student’s work.

h.                   Allow the parent/ stakeholder to read and respond to the writing in the publication stage first.

i.                     Ask the adult if there are any further comments (anything they wish to tell you about, elaborate on) after reading the written work. Ask about the student’s reading or writing at home.

j.                     Give the parent/stakeholder information explaining such aspects of teaching as standards, developmental stages, the importance of reading and writing at home, to help him or her understand and appreciate the goals for building literacy.

k.                    Write a report.

f.         Briefly describe the lesson telling the name and author of the tradebook and what your objectives were. (Discuss the links to the student’s assessment, why you focused on the particular minilesson. Based on the findings of the IRI, the student needed… based on the writing assessment the student needed instruction in the following: which conventions of standard written English, …which content traits to improve…)

g.       Tell who the parent /stakeholder is and the relationship to the student.  Describe the response and any further comments (insights) about the student’s writing. (You may want to tape this to capture the response.)

h.       What does the parent/stakeholder say about the student’s uses of literacy at home? (How, where, and when does the student read and write?)

i.         What did you need to explain to the parent about the way you teach reading and writing? (Tell about quality, integrated assessment and instruction.)

j.         What did you learn from the Scribliolink process (linking home or stakeholders and school through writing process) that will help you support this student and others in general.

Turn in:  The rubric for grading, the guided reading lesson plan using the class format, the report with a-e answered, the student samples from the developmental writing process.

File Name and Type

LAE 6319

Scoring Rubric

Unacceptable– initial level (Does not meet criteria) 0 points

Has not met the objectives stated in the purpose:

To appreciate the Synchronous Model of reading/ writing/ spelling development

To link assessment and instruction in reading, writing, and spelling to the Florida Sunshine State grade level standards

To provide a link between the writing instruction in school and literacy at home

To develop a lesson to integrate reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing and visually representing with Guided Reading and Reciprocal Mapping

To teach the conventions of standard English, spelling patterns,

To provide opportunities for students to be readers, writers, reactors, and responders

 

 

 

Acceptable– Satisfactory  (Meets criteria/ Satisfactory) 3 points

Has satisfactorily met most of  the objectives in the purpose:

To appreciate the Synchronous Model of reading/ writing/ spelling development

To link assessment and instruction in reading, writing, and spelling to the Florida Sunshine State grade level standards

To provide a link between the writing instruction in school and literacy at home

To develop a lesson to integrate reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing and visually representing with Guided Reading and Reciprocal Mapping

To teach the conventions of standard English, spelling patterns,

  To provide opportunities for students to be readers, writers,    reactors, and responders

Exemplary (Meets Criteria- Mastery) 5 points

Has met the objectives stated in the purpose with a high level of professional expertise:

To appreciate the Synchronous Model of reading/ writing/ spelling development

To link assessment and instruction in reading, writing, and spelling to the Florida Sunshine State grade level standards

To provide a link between the writing instruction in school and literacy at home

To develop a lesson to integrate reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing and visually representing with Guided Reading and Reciprocal Mapping

To teach the conventions of standard English, spelling patterns,

To provide opportunities for students to be readers, writers, reactors, and responders

 

 

Language Arts Assignment: Theme Cycle

 

Purpose(s):       Thematic Interdisciplinary Unit  

·                    Provide opportunities to integrate the Language Arts in content

·                     Provide opportunities in all aspects of literacy, showing that reading and writing are valuable

·                     Provide opportunities to select materials for authentic reading

·                     Provide opportunities for creative, personal response

·                     Teach students effective study skills: time management strategies, to organize and remember information, test-taking strategies

Procedures:

1. Use Chapter 15 of Tompkins to guide you as you develop initial plans for a theme cycle, thematic, interdisciplinary unit. On pages 627, there is a sample of a middle-grade theme cycle on Flight. Your planning will include the format similar to the webs on page 627 with some changes. The first is the addition of an essential question. The essential question focuses the unit on a key concept that you want all the students to learn related to the topic. The other changes to be added follow the graphic organizer discussed in class and presented below.  Plan to teach appropriate time-management skills, skills to organize and remember information, and test-taking skills.

3.      You may hand write if legible and neat, type, cut and paste, or use the computer program Inspiration.  Your Thematic Unit Planning cluster will allow you to see in a graphically organized format how you have conceptualized your thematic unit and the connections you have made among its parts. If you work with a group from within the class, include one cluster and individual reflections for each candidate in one duotang.

1.                    Prepare study skill minilessons to include in your unit in the area of time management, organizing and remembering information, and test-taking skills. (1 lesson following the format needed for a grade of Distinguished.)

2.                    Prepare a brief presentation (5-7 minutes) to share with the class. Include a handout of the cluster. Share lesson plan, too. Make the presentation one in which you motivate the teachers to want to teach the unit.

 

Turn in:             Cluster, a separate reflection and rubric for each person in the group.  

                  

Rubric for Theme Cycle Unit Plan, Lesson Plan

 

Developing

Basic

Proficient

Distinguished

Has no reflection.

Has reflected but does not relate to professional gains.

Has a reflection on professional gains.

Has a thoughtful, one- to two-page reflection on what were   professional gains from the process.

Lacking an essential question and /or parts or all of planning cluster or lesson.

Has a question and a developed planning cluster.

Has a question and a fully-developed planning cluster including a box for study skills

Has an essential question and a fully- developed planning cluster with all parts.

 

Has lesson plan with some parts e

Has well-developed lesson plan with most parts integrated

Has well-developed lesson plan with all parts integrated

Does not present the cluster in an interesting manner or does not have a handout of the cluster for classmates or no visuals for the presentation.

Presents the cluster.  Has a handout of the cluster for classmates. Has visuals for the presentation.

Presents the cluster in an interesting manner.  Has a handout of the cluster for classmates. Has visuals for the presentation.

Presents the cluster in an interesting manner.  Has a handout of the cluster for classmates. Has visuals for the presentation that are easily seen and read.

Work is less than professional in quality and appearance.

All work is professional quality and appearance, several mechanical errors.

All work is professional quality and appearance, few mechanical errors.

All work is professional quality and appearance, no mechanical errors.

Self-evaluation___________________________

Dr. Fine’s evaluation______________________

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Course Schedule / Topics / Assignments for Section 01

 

Dates

Topics

Reading Assignments; *Assignments due (% of grade) Weights

1)  5/11/04

Overview of Language Arts Class: Theories of Learning, Language Learning & Culture; Text-IN2 the Classroom;

 

Read the TEXT-IN2 the Classroom; Ch.1

2) 5/13/04

Theories of Learning, Language Learning & Culture; Text-IN2 the Classroom; Journal writing

* Form community for unit plan.  

Ch. 2 Tompkins,

 

3) 5/18/04

Ch. 1 Lang. & the L.A.; Lang. & Culture, TEXT-IN2 the Classroom, Journal writing

Read John’s BRI (IRI) Ch. 3 & 4;  Bring FIU E-MAIL;

4) 5/20/04

Ch. 2 Teaching and Assessing Language Arts, IRI;

Ch. 5

 

5) 5/25/04

Ch. 3.& 4  Guided Reading ; Looking at Words; Assessment in Reading, Writing

Writing Strategies- Reciprocal Mapping; Scribliolink

TEXT-IN2 Due (20%)

__X 5 = __

Ch. 12

6) 5/27/04

Ch. 12 Learning to Spell; Process,

 Ch. 7 ; IRI Due (20%)

__X5 = __

7) 6/1/04

Ch. 7 Listening to Learn, Visual Literacy & Writing

Ch. 8

 8) 6/3/04

Ch. 8 Talk in the Classroom

Ch. 13

 9) 6/8/04

Ch. 13, Learning about Grammar

Ch. 15

10) 6/10/04

Thematic Unit Planning- Essential Questions

Reading /Writing Assignment Due (20%) __X 5 = __

11) 6/15/04

Thematic Unit 

 

12) 6/17/04

Working in Groups on unit

 

13) 6/22/04

Presentation of Units

Unit due (20%) __X 5 = __; Presentations

 

13) 6/24/04

Final

Final (20%) __ X 5 = __

 

 

 

Synchrony: Integrated Model of Reading, Writing, and Spelling

Match instructional strategies to stages of development"

 

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,

 

 

Adapted from: Bear, D. & Barone, D. (1998). Developing literacy: An integrated approach to assessment and instruction. Boston:

Reading! Behaviors

Writing! Behaviors

Developmental Stage

Spelling Behaviors

Spelling Stage

Directionality

Situation-dependent,

EMERGENT

Scribbling

Prephonemic

No concept of word

Drawings with some

 

Random letters or

 

Retellings: Heaps

writing

 

numerals, Examples:

 

 

 

 

bed-MMS7, chain-

 

 

 

 

fkjk

 

Disfluency, reading

Disfluency: writing

BEGINNING

Us of initial and final

Semiphonemic

aloud and

letter-by-letter,

 

consonants,

 

fingerpointing

 

 

Examples: bed-bd,

 

Retellings: Literal

 

 

chain-en, Inclusion of

Letter Name

level

 

 

vowels, Examples:

 

 

 

 

bed- bad

 

Silent reading

Approaching fluency:

TRANSITIONAL

Abstract and

Within word

predominates

writing by words or'

 

relational: consider

 

Approaching fluency

phrases, Focus 011

 

patterns in words

-

Expanded sight

meaning

 

Ex: chain-chane

 

vocabulary

 

 

 

 

Retellings:

 

 

 

 

Summaries, Analysis

 

 

 

 

Familiarity with

Familiarity with

INTERMEDlATE

Morphological

Syllable juncture and

different styles and

different writing

AND

analysis, inflectional

Derivational

genres, Expression

styles and genres,

ADVANCED

and derivational, Ex:

constancy

and dramatic

Building expression

 

battle-batel, pleasure-

 

presence, Analysis

and voice

 

plesure

 

and generalizations

 

 

 

 

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,

Reading! Behaviors

Writing! Behaviors

Developmental Stage

Spelling Behaviors

Spelling Stage

Directionality

Situation-dependent,

EMERGENT

Scribbling

Prephonemic

No concept of word

Drawings with some

 

Random letters or

 

Retellings: Heaps

writing

 

numerals, Examples:

 

 

 

 

bed-MMS7, chain-

 

 

 

 

fkjk

 

Disfluency, reading

Disfluency: writing

BEGINNING

Us of initial and final

Semiphonemic

aloud and

letter-by-letter,

 

consonants,

 

fingerpointing

 

 

Examples: bed-bd,

 

Retellings: Literal

 

 

chain-en, Inclusion of

Letter Name

level

 

 

vowels, Examples:

 

 

 

 

bed- bad

 

Silent reading

Approaching fluency:

TRANSITIONAL

Abstract and

Within word

predominates

writing by words or'

 

relational: consider

 

Approaching fluency

phrases, Focus 011

 

patterns in words

-

Expanded sight

meaning

 

Ex: chain-chane

 

vocabulary

 

 

 

 

Retellings:

 

 

 

 

Summaries, Analysis

 

 

 

 

Familiarity with

Familiarity with

INTERMEDlATE

Morphological

Syllable juncture and

different styles and

different writing

AND

analysis, inflectional

Derivational

genres, Expression

styles and genres,

ADVANCED

and derivational, Ex:

constancy

and dramatic

Building expression

 

battle-batel, pleasure-

 

presence, Analysis

and voice

 

plesure

 

and generalizations

 

 

 

 

Adapted from: Bear, D. & Barone, D. (1998). Developing literacy: An integrated approach to assessment and instruction. Boston:

Houghton, Mifflin, p. 64'  '       .